Talk:Gardens Map (Atlas of Worlds)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Rb70U8Jzgyo alternate video
, with the reddit feedback here :
Didn't want to put it up as there's already a video here and I don't know if we want two links or not —The preceding unsigned comment was added by @DeletedUser25933 (talk • contribs) 22 November 2013
Please try to make sure that sentences are grammatically correct and informative if you are going to edit them, especially in the introductory description in the beginning of each map (aka the first thing everybody reads.)
Example: Your jungle valley arena room description...and you took out the word "typical" here:
"The arena is square and has the typical square column arrangement in the middle" While the sentence was not very good before you edited it, at did at least convey the overall shape of the Arena, being the 'typical square outline that blocks movement and its borders, and forces movement either around the outside of it, in a narrow passage vs. devourers, or in the middle of it, where there is far more density of these burst-capable monsters.
If you want to improve it, rewrite rather than removing a word that could convey information to some who identify with the sentences' description, and leaving it implying there is only one square configuration possible in poe, because it's the square column arrangement. Slow down, I've been following your edits and I know there's going to be a bunch of re-editing for grammar, spelling, randomly breaking boss table skill lists... do it right, not fast...you are definitely making improvements in some of them, but others it seems you have obviously rushed through.
No hate, just love and info <3.
- Thank you, I needed that. I definitely started to treat some of the pages as if they were my personal notes... I will try to be more articulate, but I would like to explain myself. I decided to contribute because I noticed most maps, after the changes, offered little or no information on the bosses other than their names. That's a top priority for hardcore-only players like me and the goal was to help others be prepared for the boss fights now, before someone has the time to make map pages pretty. I'm also not a native, so it holds me back when trying to describe everything in terms that would be both precise and appealing to the masses. Sorry for making a bit of a mess, I will try to extend my edits to more than just "how can this map kill you in a pill". --Aman666 (talk) 01:36, 10 October 2016 (UTC)
- Here is the wayback machine archive. https://web.archive.org/web/20170517113101/https://pathofexile.gamepedia.com/Terrace_Map Neokowloon (talk) 17:56, 28 January 2020 (UTC)